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With all these paths to take,
And all the decision one needs to make,
I wish I could disappear
I want someone to take me away from here
There must be a better place then right here
I wish I could disappear
There must be more then life
I need to get away from here
I wish I could disappear
©2008-2009 ~Quarion113
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Author's Comments

I got inspired by the song Disappear by The Summer Obsession. I don't own The Summer Obsession or the song Disappear.

The lyrics go:

I'm trapped in a world that I can't take
Where everything's unrealistic and fake
I'm hiding out and planning my escape
I hope I'm not the only one
Please come and rescue me tonight

I just wish that I could disappear
Someone take me far away from here
Do you suppose there's more to life out there?

There's no happiness surrounding me
Hate and ugliness is all I see
I wanna leave it all behind
I'm running out of time
Please come and rescue me tonight

I just wish that I could disappear
Someone take me far away from here
Do you suppose there's more to life out there?

And I don't wanna be blind
I wanna open my mind
I wanna know if there's a purpose to this life
Will I ever find it? I'm running out of time...

Trapped in a world that I can't take
I'm hiding out and planning my escape
Please come and rescue me tonight

I just wish that I could disappear
Someone take me far away from here
Do you suppose there's more to life out there?

I just wish that I could disappear

Hope you like!

Quarion

Edit: Changed the second line. It wasn't to my liking and there was a slight error.

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:iconquarion113:
GAH!!!! It isn't changing my edit!!!! :iconangryplz:

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lol Ha ha ha. It's not taking your edit. xD I'm sorry thats not funny. By the way. Your poem makes no sence.

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Hours of tai chi, kung fu, karate, comedy skits and salsa dancing is just how I spend one day in the shortest week in the summer. :la:
:iconquarion113:
It doesn't....Meh whatever. You tend to hate on my poetry that pull out of nothing in...a minute lol :shrug:

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:iconletitbericeball:
Maybe if you spent some time working on your poetry it might be good.

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Hours of tai chi, kung fu, karate, comedy skits and salsa dancing is just how I spend one day in the shortest week in the summer. :la:
:iconquarion113:
It isn't exactly something I am going to strive for. I also don't know how I can get it better. :shrug:

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